It’s why most of these series just gets worse and worse with more books. This is an issue most litrpg authors has, because they think we will find it cool to just be told someone can do something. The thoughts of the MC? Detailed explanation of why the MC thinks that way, but he doesn’t let the audience experience it.

They want to show off a side of a power or character or some backstory, but u don’t get to experience it.

This is a flaw with all authors who writes these kinds of stories. The worst flaw of the book is that the author hasn’t mattered the art of “show, don’t tell”. He isn’t great for different kinds of voices, but the MC is decent. The characters also seem competent most of the time. Sure, the MC is op, but he actually has some opponents that gives of the feeling that they can beat him. Story is decent, the characters are interesting and the author doesn’t just make the MC op, but actually gives the other characters their own powers. I can wait on the next book, but I have no excitement right now about it. The book will have another part in the series which is good, but I still don't see the wow factor. he was cool That is enough spoilers for now. What happened to William at the end? The class structure and race structured systems are no helpful at all. Even though I think he was not strong, he at least made sense to me. I have no idea why she was even a side character. He just wants more and more challenges, but then he seemed super soft when telling about his background story. They say he is a person who loves challenges. ***spoilers*** the explanation of him was super weird. I think that there was just to much going on and it didn't end well. As he grows in power and slowly transforms from a bored office worker to a true apex hunter. Follow Jake as he explores this new vast multiverse filled with challenges and opportunities. Grab your copy of Primal Hunter today on Kindle, Kindle Unlimited, or Audible (narrated by Travis Baldree).Ībout the Series: Experience an apocalypse LitRPG with levels, classes, professions, skills, dungeons, loot, and all of the great traits of progression fantasy and LitRPG that you've come to expect. This is the world Jake was meant to be born in.ĭon't miss the start of this hit LitRPG fantasy series with millions of views on Royal Road. His fellow coworkers falter at every turn. His new reality should breed fear and concern. Into a tutorial filled with dangers and opportunities. Jake, a seemingly average office worker, finds himself thrust into this new world. A place where power is the only thing anyone can truly rely on. The universe reached a threshold humanity didn’t even know existed, and it was time to finally be integrated into the vast multiverse. It was a day like any other when suddenly the world changed. On just another average day, Jake finds himself in a forest filled with monsters, dangers, and opportunity.

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